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I Think You Should Love Me

There’s a crevice in my heart,

along with an exhausted smile,

Hiding in the darkness, and when

no-one sees, it weeps.

 

Then you come along, silently,

yet it trembles my world.

My heart was breathin’ so lonely,

now I know this emptiness can’t be fulfilled.

 

And I stop hatin’, right at the very

moment you look into my eyes.

That’s when I realize, you can’t

have a broken heart without believing in Love.

 

Time Passes by, Beauty Changes,

Love Faded, and People Die –

You’ll always end up being Alone.

I think you should love me.

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Written by
erica-c
Chinese
Published
Jul 26, 2010
Lines·Words
16·96
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