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Erica Chen
Poems
Jul 2010
I Think You Should Love Me
There’s a crevice in my heart,
along with an exhausted smile,
Hiding in the darkness, and when
no-one sees, it weeps.
Then you come along, silently,
yet it trembles my world.
My heart was breathin’ so lonely,
now I know this emptiness can’t be fulfilled.
And I stop hatin’, right at the very
moment you look into my eyes.
That’s when I realize, you can’t
have a broken heart without believing in Love.
Time Passes by, Beauty Changes,
Love Faded, and People Die –
You’ll always end up being Alone.
I think you should love me.
I need some Serious Poetry Technique to Smooth this Piece.
So Poets, a little help here?
Written by
Erica Chen
San Francisco
(San Francisco)
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