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Oct 2023
Your self-righteous really bothers me
to the very core of my sinful soul
which you don't seem to realize at all
because you’re so consumed by your own ego

I wish you had done some self-evaluation
because you don't speak for all
thinking that you do
being so defensive
for others
when many or all
are not offended
we don't need your "saving"
but if it makes you feel better
especially about your past
then just do what is right
especially when no one is watching
because we all know the truth
you have difficulty doing so
your history shows it
your culture
your people
and lies

your narcissism really bothers me
regardless of what side you belong
because you don't seem to understand
that humility and shame goes a long way.
Still in the works. Critiques are welcome as always.
Mr Silence
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Mr Silence  122/M/Here
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