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Sep 2013
Remember the time
When we kissed beneath these stars

Before light left the night
When you swore we would always be alright

Yet now I stand beneath these stars
Clutching the shattered pieces of your broken heart

And though they cut me so
I can not bear to let you go





Oh stranger in the rain
Please remember we who died

Only to prove the might
Of those who fear the night
This was my first attempt at "differentclothing" I didn't like where I was going with it, as I wanted it to be a bigger picture than two lover's story. So I took the line "oh stranger in the rain" and onward, and reworked everything until I got "differentclothing" but I still really like the first four couplets, so here they are. They don't fit very well with the stranger bit, but I wanted to explain my writing process a bit.
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