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ONE FRIDAY NIGHT ON THE WAY HOME.

On the way back

from the cinema

with your old man

 

one Friday night

he stopped

at the fish and chip shop

 

and ordered chips

in salt and vinegar

in a large bag

 

and walked home

down Meadow Row

he talking of the films

 

you'd seen

how he once met

the actress

 

in some film festival

up West

you were thinking

 

of the cowboy

in the film

and how well

 

he drew his gun

especially using

his right hand

 

to get the gun

from his left hand holster

a kind of cross over style

 

and you thought

I must try that

when I get home

 

get it down

to perfection

and he said he'd seen

 

the actor( not

the cowboy guy

some other)

 

in the theatre once

in some play

you thought

 

how you'd show Ingrid

once you had

the technique of

 

cross over drawing

of the gun

to a fine art

 

she'd sit on the grass

by Banks House

and watch

 

with her mouth open

as you did

your show piece

 

and you'd show her

how fast you could draw

your 6 shooter or

 

maybe you'd wear

both guns

one on each side

 

the old man was still

yakking on

about this actress

 

but you were imagining

Ingrid sitting there

on the grass

 

or on the bicycle sheds

listening to you talk

of the film

 

and how good

the cowboy was

and you saw her

 

in your mind's eye

( as you and your old man

crossed over Rockingham Street

 

and up the slope

to the Square)

sitting there

 

with her eyes wide open

her hands

like sleeping doves

 

lying in her lap

and on the leg

(as usual)

 

a crimson mark

from her father's

hard slap.

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terry-collett
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Sep 17, 2013
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