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Blunt love

by jana-b

If that was a blast of love I’d hate to see your hate. Your blunt, forceful love comes from fear, rains in blows, and leaves me - smaller, sadder, reactive— reeling for equilibrium.
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Written by
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Apr 5, 2022
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Just my mum, weighing in due to concerns.

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#motherdaughter#opinions#subtlety#grandchildren
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