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Sandcastles

Once I built a sandcastle and showed it to the ocean. I had made sure that every detail was perfect— working as hard as I could to keep it safe, because all I ever wanted was for it to last long. The waters hardly noticed, they were far too concerned with their own purposes to even bother with my effort. When they crashed at my feet, it sent the best kind of chills up my spine— but that only happened if it was convenient for them. They'd never go out of their way just to find their way to me. Sometimes I would try to go out to them, wanting the seafoam to rush over my toes and the cold spray to splash into me. But sometimes they didn't come. The waves went back out and wanted nothing to do with me. The next day I returned to the ocean. What I found was that in a matter of hours, the waves I had loved so much had taken the chance to destroy. The sandcastle that I'd worked so hard on was completely gone, without a trace, nothing to show for it. You wouldn't even know that I'd tried in the first place. You and the ocean have a lot in common.
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