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Country Club Scribbles

"Great Scott"

Like Lucas and Nathan

Y'all ain't perfect but you're trying

Relying on something other than your name to take you far...

You're a star

But let you shine diminish as each person you thought you were close to,

Tarnishes what you hold dear

No fear sweetheart,

No fear

Claim what is yours

Speak loudly and proudly

So that the haters hear

Let them know you're here

And that nothing can stop you...

---

Back to the drawing board

Or better yet back to this blank canvas

familiar and inviting and yet I can’t help but wonder

how these words will create an image

I guess there ain’t no better way to find out

but to move onward

---

How ‘bout we search for some meaning

A little substance from the soul

I mean maybe I can’t sing but I bet you gon’ feel this

I’m just tryna be the realest

give my people something relatable

and also a fragment of me

writing about what I see

or what might be

the hopes and dreams

of a child in this restless city

gazing upon the night sky

pondering on his life’s importance

in comparison to the billions of stars that shine bright

could he possibly one day emit light?

give direction to those who might’ve lost sight

could he scheme up a dream as big as Martin did

and if so, would he reach the masses?

because lord knows in the days we live in

we need hope

but how does one cope

when hundreds of thousands of lives are being taken by dope or foots of rope

we’ve lost our way

a country that once proclaimed to be best

now stands on its last legs

and the people we elect to govern us

continue to dig us deeper into this hole

have we nothing left to show?

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jimmy-desire
28 / M / Haitian
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Sep 1, 2013
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