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Aikin The Deadman
Poems
Aug 2013
Sandcastles
Every night you fall to pieces,
Wish you were someone else,
Whatever it is it freezes,
Watch them, the sandcastles.
Reflections in the mirrors tell lies,
Wish you were someone else,
Watch them all die as flies,
Watch them grow, the sandcastles.
Iām invisible to them,
Wish you were someone else,
You over power them,
Watch them rise the sandcastles.
You make the change,
Wish you weren't someone else,
Read your list to burn their names,
Watch it grow, your sandcastle.
With power comes force,
Thought you had known so well,
Can you feel any remorse,
As your sandcastle, it fell.
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Worked on this one for quite a while, since May actually.
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