Asked to rewrite your verses and curves, I would start with the obvious and end on your nerves.
Freeze, tease, please

These are the thoughts and still the heart glitches, type passion aggressive resowing the stitches.
More, core, sore

Bore me with pages all sullen in ink,
Not another retelling what words would you think.
Less, dress, mess

Guess the next line win a dubious prize, fling fate a falter then resummarize.
Green, seen, keen

Mean as a measure penned for more kindling, recurred, reimbursed, remet in the dwindling.
Mend, lend, end

Fend for the hapless reposing the story, I've edged on the ledges your figure for glory.
Aghast, Tasked, masked