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May 2021
Walls
written November 27th, 2020

I've built walls
rigid strong and nearly impermeable
forming this fortress around me,
nothing gets in or out.

Every sortie against them
leaves them a little stronger,
and me inside
a little more isolated.

Over time I have
grown into and through
my walls safe
from a war
that is long over.
Some poems I just don't know what to do with. This has been in my notebook for months. It goes on for pages with different themes related to walls. I page past it every day, and think it needs more organization, some shape, but I don't know quite what, so I page on by. Today I'm posting one version of it. Maybe in the future I will write another poem about walls that feels more complete and finished.

I love the last stanza, it was originally:

Over time I have
grown into and through my walls
safe from a war
that is long over.

It's the same words, but that line break in the posted version, is it me or my walls that are safe? Thanks for reading me!
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clmathew  52/F
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