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Jan 2021
“Hey”
“Good morning”
  “How was your day today”  
   “What did you eat?”  
    “Your beautiful”
     “I want to hug you”
      “I want to kiss you”
       “I want to travel the world with you”
        “I miss you”
         “Let’s FaceTime”
           “I like you”
            “You mean the world to me”
             “I love you”

              ... “I love you more” I said

               “I will love you forever” he said
             “I won’t leave you” he said
          “If anything happens just know I love you” he said

               “Goodnight, and sweet dreams” he said

~
“Hey..”  
“Let’s figure this out”  
“I’m sorry”  
“I don’t want you in my life”
“I hate you”
“Bye” he said
“I love you” he said

And we never talk to each other again
I need help writing poems lol any advice?? I feel like it’s annoying using the word “ He said” a lot after each dialogue so I left it blank without he said
Amy
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Amy  18/F/Los Angeles
(18/F/Los Angeles)   
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