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tracks

*ants crawl on

slowly*

 

 

1.

left eye is hopping fast for days now

and time's but a fair damsel

of delightful illusion

how she taunts and teases you

into sweet oblivion

of wickedly sensual basking

 

she drugs you with deep charisma

and struts at the doorway of your senses

she clutches onto the tracks in your mind

and claws deep into your ragged psyche

that same old song playing

over and over...

........over

 

 

2.

see right through train's chassis

rail sleepers spin vigorously backward

in such frightful haste

to get nowhere

no-one knows the real speed of time

out there.....

 

but for mere mortals

it's leniently paced in adagio

and parceled in mellowed excruciation

as ants walk serene

alongside the tracks

 

 

3.

creep into chaotic patterns

fall into hell

through a secret back door

even satan knows not of

as perched as he is

on his oh-so lofty pile of ordure

his blind heart

sees not

the strobed tracks

of your visiting soul

 

 

4.

take a syncopated shot up the arm

from the foul fang of a kind sinner

 

while saints bathe in fat glory

elsewhere

 

when you look again

you lie alone in a corner room

broken

yet untethered

 

tracks to heaven so obscured

by

your paradoxical attempts at levity

on the twisted playground of life's malady

 

 

5.

how badly you tripped

so many **** times

you ....got in the way

of your

own

remise

 

 

each time you fell

you looked UP

expecting help

when all the while

the answers lay

at your feet:

 

[your own mistakes are authentic and real;

you try to fox-tread out

but trying to turn your back on a *****

called destiny - equals catastrophe personified

oh, she WILL beckon you back

with her crooked finger

most kindly

to ensure no overdue lessons wait too long.....]

 

 

 

*the ants crawl on

so

slowly*

 

 

 

S T, Wed 10 July 2013

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can't expect no bread falling from the sky...lol

absolutely love Bach on the lute....with such a delicate and organic instrument, how can one possibly go wrong!

right? lol

right :)

sub-entry: "lutenist's ecstasy"

1.

pear-shaped rebirth

would that these twelve maple ribs

bear traces of Adam's

tapered fingertips

bandying calloused hours

over triple rosettes

protected in intricacy

2.

may

echoes

of this love

resound well and strong

on ledged sympathetic strings

on an invisible bridge

over water's surface

currents travel

on angel wings

as notes of unambiguous clarity

ring out and extend

no rude clarion-calls

only

lutenist's ecstasy :)

http://m.youtube.com/watch?feature=related&v;=2uApiRD7GB8#/watch?feature=related&v;=2uApiRD7GB8

(J.S. Bach: Fuge BWV 998)

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