LOVE STARTS WITH UNDERSTANDING. You write your words and think we live inside your mind the sense to reach. You add to that some obscure words and lots of your figures of speech.
Your poem gets a horrid piece that you don't grasp after a day. How can we know what you would mean? Only a witch its gist can say.
You know that mumbling to yourself can't build a thought in people's mind. If you would like to dwell in hearts the heart's key is to understand. ____________