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Jack Mandala
Poems
Aug 2020
speeding bullet to the abyss
months of articulate crafting
every curve
edge
splinter
shaved
she's beautiful.
just one more spot
one more nudge
make it perfect
what a beauty
make her part of my collection
front and center
but
one more curve
turns to another
correction
correction
correction
corrections turn to a revision
revision turns to a loss of the old
so perfect
but now so gone
goodbye old
hello new
too close to the sun
melting into the abyss
broken
handicapped
disposable
goodbye
gone forever
#farewell
#departure
#sad
#love
#loss
#relationship
#broken
#depression
Written by
Jack Mandala
21/M/Arizona
(21/M/Arizona)
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