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speeding bullet to the abyss

by jack-mandala

months of articulate crafting every curve edge splinter shaved she's beautiful. just one more spot one more nudge make it perfect what a beauty make her part of my collection front and center but one more curve turns to another correction correction correction corrections turn to a revision revision turns to a loss of the old so perfect but now so gone goodbye old hello new too close to the sun melting into the abyss broken handicapped disposable goodbye
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jack-mandala
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Written by
jack-mandala
21 / M
Published
Aug 2, 2020
Time
2m
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gone forever

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#farewell#departure#sad#love#loss#relationship#broken#depression
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