I have been advised (“…now don’t take this the wrong way”) That I Am too RAW…
It was suggested (“…merely a suggestion”) That I Water down my art… Dilute it… Make it more palatable… Sugar coat What may be bitter… Make what is not nice Nicer… For the more… “Delicate Audiences…”
Don’t expound upon Addiction or Anger or The Streets Politics, Passion, ******* or Love Gone Bad Don’t say ****… or ***… or Hell… or ****… Bottom line… In the name of Money… and In an attempt to reach a wider suburban demographic Tone it down… sweeten it up… Sell out….
And you know… He’s probably right… Commerciality does sell…
My dilemma… if I took out the Politics, Passion, Anger, and The Streets… the Damns , *****, Hells and ***** I may as well be Doctor Seuss…and A cute and flowery poet~ I am not
I am what I am (a woman fully grown) I’ve done what I’ve done (some things only Me and God know) I’ve seen what I’ve seen (I’ll tell you about it one day) I write about life … and
Not only is life not always palatable It can be quite bitter...
Not only is it sometimes not nice It is sometimes not even Sanitary...
And if the more… “Delicate Audiences…” Can’t get with it… Then **** their ***** to hell Let ‘em watch a ******* TV