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Early Thursday Morning.

I don't know what it feels like in space.

What the astronauts feel as they float and look out the window

and see a colossal Earth

As they look out the window and see a glimmering light,

an auratic moon and a vast emptiness

It must be pretty

But I doubt it is anything like swinging in the dawn

As I swing, my black and ***** hair is blown back and forth as it kisses the air

With every swing I take I leave behind my melancholies

 

I've been hearing the birds sing for the past two hours,

and the sun is not yet visible.

If I swing a few more minutes

and the cloudy skies clear,

it'll wake from its daily nap,

from behind my back.

Maybe I can see its reflection through the water in the pool

that sits a few meters from me.

 

Oh, how the wind is cool.

It blows away those dandelion flower seeds that hit my skin.

When I swing and glide through the wind,

it becomes the closest thing to flying or anything akin.

It does not oppose

Instead, it pushes me higher, closer to the sky

as if I could fly, giving me wings, like the birds that sing.

 

 

If I could go to space or wake up early one day,

I would choose to stay.

Here I can swing and kick the air,

hear the birds’ serenade,

and smell the freshness of the moist earth in the air.

This beauty cannot be compared.

I rather swing and observe the forming of this beauty here

Like I do the early Thursday morning .

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Mexican
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May 16, 2013
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is auratic a word? from aura.

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