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Depersonalization (Sonnet)

Closely I observe myself from afar.

My world transforms into a perplexed dream.

Earth-toned hues shine brighter than any star.

Perception composes a wary theme.

Contorted tree limbs mock every movement.

Eyes become filled with cotton candy clouds.

Conversations are no longer fluent.

Alone I walk in a burial shroud.

I pinch my arm to make sure I’m not dead.

Numb is the only sensation I feel.

Broken shards of faith bear a tint of red.

The face in the mirror doesn’t look real.

Existence slowly crumbles into sand.

I’m a stranger who roams this foreign land.

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Written by
donny-edward-klein
Croatian
Published
Apr 7, 2013
Lines·Words
14·97
Notes

This is my first Sonnet. I thought I'd pay homage to a condition I've had for many many years. This condition has been defined as "The Alice in Wonderland disease."  It started on New Year's Eve 1996 when I smoked *** that was laced with something. The resulting effects still plague me from time to time; however I use it to my advantage now. Instead of running from it, I write about it. I really enjoyed the challege of writing a Sonnet, but holy **** are my fingers tired from tapping.

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