chest in tatters fire rising from the hole his fists pounding against the door splintering wood blood pouring across white, skinless knuckles
an inhuman scream like a wind out of hell rising from the hollow throat mouth a misplaced act of self mutilation stretched and pinned wide letting the smoke flow out
scorched flesh hanging in strips from the gory wood fire in his breath but eyes (shut tight) held storms without thunder
the wind and violence grew louder crack, crack, crack, the door held as the voice broke descending harshly from rage to despair
fire in his chest choked with emptiness poured out itβs dying breath black and putrid the taste of loss like burning plastic
his forehead fell against the cracked and bloodstained wood the blow struck silence in his throat
eyes opened to a point somewhere past the stained and pitted barrier
they were grey like a sky consuming cloud slowly seeping to the ground as it traps the day from horizon to horizon in endless whispers
(take my name, but tell my voice to stop burning yours into my throat
give me memory and I will show you what it means to die
forgive me
I have lost your story)
I had a really hard time with this. Any feedback would be vastly appreciated.