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Nov 2019
HIS WIFE TELLS HIM SHE LOVES HIM

She spoke
like a stone

thrown
into a pond

the ripples of her
((((((thought))))))

spreading all over
his mind

like words writ large
on the air

as if one could
pluck them from there.

Then, sealing it with a smile:
she retreated into silence

closing the door
of her voice

behind her.
***

I wanted to speak not just of the words said but more their effect on me and how they sank into my psyche and entered my unconsciousness and how they were greeted there by my mind....not just sound but the sense of the sound and how the words won me and owned me....how I was transformed by them and by the alchemy of her love made a better me than I could ever hope to be.
Donall Dempsey
Written by
Donall Dempsey  Guildford
(Guildford)   
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