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Check on Me (rough draft-give me suggestions

my parents came to check on me

i quickly shut the lights

turned off the TV

everything was black so they knew I was alright

 

my parents came to check on me

i threw the bottles in the trash

took out the bags

everything was empty so they knew I was alright

 

my parents came to check on me

i did all my homework

smiled happily

everything was normal so they knew I was alright

 

my parents came to check on me

i should have told them that

my life is gray and

everything is not alright

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Mar 24, 2013
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