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Jose Radin Llorca Garduque
Poems
Sep 2019
The Creation & Fall of Man
Disappointed by the imperfections
Of His fellow spirit companions
God created a less menacing vessel
For those who commit sin & evil
This is the human body
Also meant to be sinless & happy
But the first humans β the man & woman
Were also tempted to sin by Satan
Going against the will of God
Like fallen angels they have been bad
Yet, the Creator this time was struck with mercy
Towards these creatureβs frail body
Not to hell immediately, just away from Eden
To remind their descendants not to sin again!
-11/05/2015
(Dumarao)
*5th Daily Reflection from Catechism Booklet
My Poem No. 391
Written by
Jose Radin Llorca Garduque
32/Other/Philippines
(32/Other/Philippines)
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