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Jun 2019
I feel all right, and yet I feel all wrong
you look away, you say what you can
you’ve looked into my soul
now can you look into my eyes
and tell me what’s wrong with me
the way I am

a face from the past, always looking ahead
a different girl with a different name
you took hold of my hand
you can feel my hands
and have you also found a way
to feel my shame?

you’ve made me laugh, you’ve made me cry
you’ve shown me myself and a brand new start
you’ve carved your name
across my life, but why does it feel
as if you left the knife
here in my heart?

so just tell me to come to you, or stay away
I can’t seem to work this one out alone
we could be together if it’s what you want
if it’s what you need
still, I think I can make it from here
on my own

but if it’s my choice, I’ll see you again
hundreds of miles couldn’t stand in my way
but first tell me what’s wrong with me
the way I am
though they may be words I hoped to
never hear you say
Not a great effort at songwriting,  but I think I did record the feelings correctly because they still evoke the pain and confusion of a long distance romance after all of these years...
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