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Mar 2013
Into the early hours
When we wake up
We pour we pour
Fill us up
Empty agendas
For the weak
White lines
White  lies
Blowing though our minds
Shifting
Shaking
From toe to hip
Blast some more liquor
Take the hit
Hip hypnotist
Head strong
Honest
Hedonist
Buy the ticket
You take the ride
Wild days
Soon will all be over
How long till each of us is
Sober
Crap ending so far wanna keep it short and sweet. I think it start's off well capturing the moment although I lose it towards the end! Any suggestions please?
Written by
Jack Sneers
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   Nina K
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