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Hed honest

Into the early hours

When we wake up

We pour we pour

Fill us up

Empty agendas

For the weak

White lines

White lies

Blowing though our minds

Shifting

Shaking

From toe to hip

Blast some more liquor

Take the hit

Hip hypnotist

Head strong

Honest

Hedonist

Buy the ticket

You take the ride

Wild days

Soon will all be over

How long till each of us is

Sober

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Published: Mar 2, 2013
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Notes: Crap ending so far wanna keep it short and sweet. I think it start's off well capturing the moment although I lose it towards the end! Any suggestions please?

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