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Mar 2013
The only thing I can do
is take one step away
from my past
and turn the corner
of a completely disguised
pathway.

A pathway, not a tunnel;
not a tunnel that
confines you in a circular hole;
not a tunnel that runs
under a river, smothering you
from view--
but an open pathway
in the gleaming sun.
A trail that allows the
warm light to burn your shoulders.

A straight shot to pain,
to discovery, to light.
A mesmerizing array of experience,
leading to a bottomless pool
of endless love.

Take the first step.
Feedback?? Also if anyone has any suggestions of which one of my poems to submit for a teen competition thingy please tell me!!!! I can't evaluate my writing like that, so suggestions would be much appreciated:)
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