It was Friday, March 23. The sun was burning bright in a clear blue sky. It was a beautiful day to fall in love.
After school my mother and I went to Macy’s to go prom dress shopping. As soon as I walked into the store, there they were.
They were sparkly, twinkling to me from a distance as if they were saying “Jenny! Come look at me!”. Some were long and flowy, and as they drooped down they looked like a waterfall.
So I scurried around Macy’s eagerly trying to find a dress that I liked. Me and my mom picked up a couple for me to try on, but so far nothing really stood out to me.
I then left to go to look at a different section of dresses. I turned the corner and then I saw her. The love of my life. Some would say that she was simple, but she had a such an elegant and poofy skirt that anyone who wore it would feel like a princess.
After examining her with a huge smile, I was about to take her and run to my mother and show her, but then I remembered. It was time to look at the price tag. I was scared. My stomach began to ache. And I also knew that any other dress I’d wear wouldn’t feel good enough if it wasn’t her I was wearing.
After glaring at the dress for a minute, my hands became restless and sprung out as I flipped up the price tag. It was $300 And I was heartbroken.
My mom came around the corner and saw me frowning at the price tag. I felt like I was about to cry, and I think she saw it in my face. For the emotions I were feeling were so intense it was just like a forbidden love. I showed her the price tag and her eyes widened a little. I knew she was gonna say no, and she did.
She saw how upset I was and offered to sow a dress for me just like that one. I then got very excited and hugged her as tight as I could.
I left Macy’s that day with a smile on my face and glowing heart.
old piece. more of just a rant. I’ve never seen a piece of clothing that was as perfect as that dress.