They land on the flowers in the garden, and The purple petals bend under their weight like Eyelashes with leftover mascara from last night. Six legs and antennae dance From stamen to stamen, a kaleidoscope of Color, and big, bug eyes stare at me With the black vacancy of their souls. They are silent predators (of nectar), Coming from the sky and touching down on their prey Like vultures swoop down on carrion. One comes close to me, advancing overhead And panic in my blood makes my heart beat As fast as its wings, going up and down. I put my hand up, palm glistening, Trying to protect myself from the terrible insect, The garden monster; And at last, deflecting from my waving hands, The butterfly flutters off into the spring air.
Please let me know what you think - I have to turn it in for a grade and I want to know how I can better it before then.