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17:00

by officialkzhang

for seventeen hours or one thousand and twenty minutes i counted i made sure the bottommost right one flickered unsatisfied with death fighting with air stuck in time the fireman’s lock aptly named oh how it teased a wonder release the brilliant doors that showed me myself yet showed no way till i ceased to see for i fail to remember which I selected where I wished to be as i’m frozen in my puddle and the glaze grows upon my legs until i fall to the ceiling and count no more
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officialkzhang
16 / M / Clinton, MS, USA
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Written by
officialkzhang
16 / M / Clinton, MS, USA
Published
Feb 6, 2019
Time
2m
Notes

Trapped in descent...

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#dark#claustrophobia#death#stuck
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