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Jan 2019
A man walks out,
But I walk in,
The path of a stranger,
My only kin,

The man was I,
But not anymore,
I'm not that person,
I'm not anymore,

The man goes to cries,
I join him there,
We come back together,
We realize we care.
Hey guys, tried writing a little differently today. Tell me how it is. No sugarcoating, just give me feedback, I'd love to see where you guys take me.
Written by
Ian Fineman  17/M/Fulton MO
(17/M/Fulton MO)   
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