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try all and error

There is a time in space from which my past I trace-

 

And try and place my hate

 

on just a moment- I own it, its mine and I control it

 

rewind and fast forward, pause it on the good parts for remembrance

 

and reminisce

 

except it’s a pestilence on whats left of it, ravaging calm into frenzy

 

and believers into skeptics

 

engorged passion pleads for action acting on rage we seek satisfaction only to realize

 

we are cause

 

and reaction

 

affect the cause directly and cause effect to react steady only if

 

eyes are open and minds are ready

 

I fear that doubt trumps hope

 

Hopefully hope doubts doubt as much as I doubt that it does

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brett-berger
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Apr 9, 2010
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