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Mark Motherland
Poems
Oct 2018
DIFFERENT JOURNEYS
remember when you we set out towards Arkle
started out
you were both young the sun shone and the air
and a little naive was sweet
you got your first house we made easy work of
reaching the summit
you made it your home the view poitively exploded
in scale
then children came along but once on the ridge the wind
picked up
life became a little more and walking became more
complexed complicated
but you held their hands we had to hold on to every rock
yet each decision carried concentration was paramount
a lot of weight
as you raised them with every decision mattered
heart and soul
ironically they weren't
children long eventually the wind subsided
they had established their
own identities and we wended our way back down
before long they had
their own lives to enjoy the pleasant walk back
to the road
then you look back on life's
long road and ask yourself? as we look back to the castellated
ridge so high and way back in
the distance
did we really raise a family? we ask, were we really up there?
It all seems so long ago now. It all seem so far away now.
Raising a family can be like conquering a mountain.
Can be read one segment at a time or straight across, the parallels are obvious.
#parenting
Written by
Mark Motherland
61/M/Lincoln, England
(61/M/Lincoln, England)
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