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Inner Workings

by @tommy-le

I can hear the gears cracking little by little. The aroma of metal and oil fills my nostrils and time slips as the clock forgets its steps. What once was a slow waltz is now a freestyle. The other machines follow suit with jagged movements. Mechanical clunks now flooding into my ears; drowning my thoughts like a white noise. Metal bending and groaning as pipes above me shake with screaming steam. The pressure reaches a dangerous threshold before-- a pause. Like time being frozen. Except for a drip from outside that fizzes on the still hot pipes. Clunks are now barely heard in the back. It’s peaceful, isn’t it- this factory at night. These machines used to dance in unison, but all of the workers have clocked out to rest. It was meant to be a break to keep from breaking, but home is a little too quiet- and thoughts begin to boil over again.
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tommy-le
27 / M
Published
Sep 6, 2018
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My first poem after some time. I'm taking an Intro to Creative Writing course right now so I am hoping to improve. This poem has gone through an amateur workshop in my class already, but I would greatly appreciate any more feedback you may have.

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