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Julio A Maldonado
Poems
Aug 2018
REDEMPTION...by Jules
Out in the desert I met a man, he
looked familiar yet it escaped me he
seems friendly but I was cautious, he
didn't say a word still I understood
him...and there was peace. I continued
on my voyage, an atmosphere of the
unknown enveloped the path, where
did it come from? where is it going? I
saw a figure, another man, trees
growing out of the bare sand,
surrounding us, they blocked the
path. What is going on? I asked the
man, he shrugged his shoulders. Rain
is coming I cannot see the man is
fading but I feel reassured that
everything will be alright. He winked,
dissapeared... I feel calm relaxed --
message acknowledged. I was
transported to the city, a true concrete
jungle. I feel close to home although I
don't recognize any of the streets,
buildings, sidewalks. No one around
for directions except for a friendly
face, a soothing smile, a passionate
voice. This time a storm approaches, it
is unescapable, I'm completely blind
and growing desperate. His touch
startles me but I feel comfort, care,
and a promise. My sight returning the
name is gone. Looking around I see all
three together, I joined, where are we
going? We are there...!
Written by
Julio A Maldonado
53/M/Houston
(53/M/Houston)
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