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Ilion is learning the codes hidden in raindrops

Ilion gray

poet extraordinary

is away

learning the codes hidden in raindrops

 

no reason for surprise;

 

for the mountains of Brooklyn, the Manhattan caverns of Sunhenge^, corridors of narrow focus for trapping the declining sun rays,

 

neither high enough, narrow blinding,

to keep a good man from doing good things that life provides as opportunities

to do the right thing

 

he muses that it took five years for the other poets to understand our

poem-dreams;

avant-garde he says,

but I laugh,

never felt more misunderstood

and reply take care, be

en garde!

 

no matter for he is learning a new language,

the codes hidden in raindrops in a land of wheat

once called Indian Territory and eager

await his return so we may

walk along the Brooklyn shoreline,

beginning from under the Brooklyn Bridge

where Washington’s men escaped a British trap

 

and he can decode for me the whispery thunderous noises of

NY

showers that come up so sudden,  so roughened, but right now,

the seductive sun blinks in Manhattan windowed towers reflecting back on to our East River as golden blinks of nature

 

We will walk lost in the absorption of our

different commonalities, holding the hands of

his young son, and my Wendy,

both of them equal in possession of round saucer eyes

that give us poems

 

He calls me me friend,

I call him brother, teacher, master, better than the best,

well recalling a late night message that bred

a five year conversation ongoing

 

not everything need be coded

what you read here

it is not coded,

for the raindrops come clear and clean

and the poems land on our tongues

bounce on the foreheads and eyes of the babes, all stored and saved for the future blessings spoken in a single tongue

 

7/18/18

 

 

 

^https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manhattanhenge

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