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To The Girl Who Thought I Was Smelling Her On The Bus (a poem)

I’m sorry

If you thought I was smelling you

I have a cold you see

it's winter,

and it would seem the life

that once graced the limbs of trees and the buds of flowers

has taken up residence

in my nasal cavity.

 

the sniffles you may have heard

were not an attempt to steal a piece of your essence

but merely the feeble accommodations of a person with

a virus.

 

of course, none of this is to say that i wouldn't want to smell you.

whereas the life of the trees and birds and flowers

has become my enemy

it seems to have been kept in you.

 

you remind me of daffodils.

i think of you and my eyes feel as if they are welling up

i am allergic to daffodils, you see.

i do think they are quite nice to look at though.

every time i am around them however,

i become nature's fool

 

i'll never see you again.

my words are falling on the deaf ears of nature

in the winter when sounds seem to be hushed

but please know

i really wasn't trying to smell you.

i couldn't smell anyways.

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Mar 24, 2010
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