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Apr 2018
In our messages I send you yellow hearts,
Is it because they remind me of the warmth of the sun?
Or is it to remind you we'll never be done?
If I were to explain, I wouldn't know where to start,
Honestly I only know why in part.
It could be because I feel like you're the one,
That our journey has only just begun,
Maybe it's just because it sets them apart.

I think the answer is more subtle,
It's that you're the perfect one for me,
That one day I see us together in a chapel,
And that every day you become more beautiful,
That you've always been the one to set me free.
It's all of it, because every moment with you is blissful
It's my first real attempt at a petrarchan sonnet, I don't feel as thought it's a complete project but am uploading it for any criticism you'd be able to give :)
Jason Elliot
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Jason Elliot  M/UK
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