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banana

I wanted to write a letter

for this girl on the bus,

but all i had to write on

was a banana.

so I wrote:

 

"when i saw you,

just now,

you are the most

spectacularly beautiful thing

i've ever seen

just now,

when I saw you."

 

she ran away.

she didn't touch

my banana.

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Written by
ryan-pemberton
Australian
Published
Sep 30, 2012
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I left this poem on the bus seat across from her, along with my full name. She has not attempted to contact me.

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