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We have separation

by @ecarsyn

Early morning, Jupiter and Venus meet face to face, frozen, a second before collision. The sky glows a burnt orange, an echo of the collision that could have been. Closer than the band of my ring, lustrous like the diamond on it, still, they long to close the 365 million miles. Jupiter and Venus lay next to each other on a Queen. Jupiter slumbers, rumbles quietly next to Venus while she counts the fluttering eyelashes. Early morning, Venus and Jupiter are 17 arc minutes away, seems like an arm’s reach, but he is so far. Lost in a dream, frantically fastened to her waist, she counts his heartbeats. Floating beneath sown lights, between the sounds of the sleeping city and the hum of the heater. She gazes upwards, finding faux constellations. Venus wakes Jupiter pressing her lips to the soft skin of his face, dawn light pours red through the blinds as Jupiter and Venus collide, for what feels like the first time all over again.
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23 / Cisgender Female
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23 / Cisgender Female
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Feb 27, 2018
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