How dreary is the moment when one soul looks upon another and in realization, says to himself, "I do not want you anymore,"
and how much worse the moment when the second sees the first and with recognition, says to herself, "You do not want me anymore."
(c) K.E. Parks, 2012
should i just remove the second stanza? thanks fr yer input guys--EDIT: wow, this is trending. hasn't happened to me before! i appreciate all of your reading sooo much, and thanks for the comments too. x