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ryan pemberton
Poems
Sep 2012
show me your guts
we **** those people.
we tell them
'oh charlie...'
'this is awful.'
'so lame.'
'so cheesy.'
we patronise them.
we embarrass them.
we **** them.
unless
their poetry is rounded
at the edges.
smoothed over
thought over
edited
workshopped
touched up.
"we want to see
your best self"
**** that.
give me your first draft.
give me the spontaneous.
initial *****.
show me your edges.
show me your
******* guts.
the real artists
hide.
even they can see
we **** those people.
Written by
ryan pemberton
Canberra
(Canberra)
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