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In a galaxy of oranges and apples.

by jessica-wong

The faint smell of the watery sugar is barely noticed. The starfruit's fragrance swept away into faint nothingness at the hands of the tropical winds of Hawaii. Hanging onto the tree, the fruit once sour and bitter undergoes a seemingly emotional transformation. The sun's sweet-tempered fingers are secretly and appealingly molding it. It learns to be sweet instead of sour, our taste buds tingling with the power to taste, but being held closely like bloodhounds on a leash. It brings an exotic originality to the table. The Vietnamese fable, blah-blah-bitty-blah its unknown. It's skin kissed by golden rays, and the once green fades into a sweet banana yellow. on the inside, it still knows its roots, it still knows the sliminess of negativity, and on the inside it holds tan pellets shaped just like tear drops, embraced within its boogers of its old bitter soul. Droplets of water drip-drop down off the waxy fruit, and it lays silently on a freckled black marble counter. Sweating sickeningly after a cold shower, its cool glistening skin signals its execution. Soon enough the executioner arrives, the sharp shining blade blinding with bright lines of reflected light. No, it wasn't nearly as crisp and sugary as an apple, nor was it even as sweet and citrusy as an orange, and yet, it was a little bit of both. The little stars stuck somewhere in-between, alone in the galaxy of oranges and apples.
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jessica-wong
American
Published
Sep 12, 2012
Time
2m
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