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Terry Collett
Poems
Sep 2012
WHILE WATCHING BLACK AND WHITE TV.
Your old man
came into the lounge
where you were watching
black and white TV
and your mother was standing
talking to an uncle
it’s the baker
your old man said
he wants his £50
what £50?
your mother asked
the £50 I owe him
well pay him
your mother said
I can’t
I don’t have it
you watched
the cowboy film
with half interest
you took a glance
at the debtor
well tell him
you’ll pay him
next week
your mother said
I told him that
last week
your old man said
what did you want
to borrow £50
from the baker for?
your mother asked
her cheeks getting flushed
to buy my new suit
what new suit?
the one I’m having made
you noticed
your old man’s
moustache flicker
and he stroked it
as he did
when cornered
your mother
breathed heavy
and you looked
at the uncle
ok
the uncle said
here’s the £50
go pay him
what you owe
to get him off your back
but you better pay me back
or I’ll bust your head
sure I will
your old man said
going out of the room
clutching the money
in his palm
your mother sighed
and the uncle
put away his wallet
into an inside pocket
and you saw that one
of the cowboys
on the black and white
TV screen
had been shot
and died
the other looked angry
and ugly
and mean.
BOY, FATHER, MOTHER, UNCLE, MONEY, DEBTS, 1950S
Written by
Terry Collett
Sussex, England
(Sussex, England)
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