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Sep 2012
I hate my poems
that’s the problem
I hate them because they try too much
(they try the impossible really)
and, yes, some of them are good
but none of them are great
and none of them get it
right
they all **** it
mess it up in small details
or don’t make out the big picture
from the little parts
except,
perhaps,
this one.
Overwhelmed
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Overwhelmed
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   cosmo naught and Ahmad Cox
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