stop writing oceans words are no place for water so take a second...
so take it away the typewriter tidepools the pauses... the pulsing punctuation of salt and sand and stone
stop writing oceans or your metaphors make sense only every six hours your voice will drown in aqueous thought your mind a faint a fading light green through the water weeds drifting ever deeper
a continuation of the shower wall, also written on a shower wall