Aug 2012
We lived on hard liquor avenue
Sat outside the bar every night
Just to have the alcoholic smell seep into our clothes
And watch the people go round and round, listening to the captivating music play
The stuff we've been mesmerized by and can't let go of
We're the reminder of where you don't want to be
Too young to be in these parts
But we're just lost here anyways
I lost control a long time ago..
Gave my soul up to Commercial St.
Sat outside the bar every night
Just to have the alcoholic smell seep into our clothes
And watch the people go round and round, listening to the captivating music play
The stuff we've been mesmerized by and can't let go of
We're the reminder of where you don't want to be
Too young to be in these parts
But we're just lost here anyways
I lost control a long time ago..
Gave my soul up to Commercial St.
This is actually something I wrote a few years ago and found again recently. I think that's why it feels so different from everything else I have posted (at least to me).
Written by
Caitlin Driscoll
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