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Dec 2017
I get a certain mindset when I put words to a screen
Formality and sombreness there really is no need
I worry over structure, I try to seem profound
But all the really matters is how it's going to sound

So now instead I'll jot it down the way the words appear
The way I do when out with friends and only they will hear.
I'll overcome the serious, just try to make it rhyme
Even if that mean I have to fudge the final line.
K.I.S.S. (Keep It Simple Stupid)

I fall into the trap often when writing of overthinking the words I use. I attempt to use clever analogies and hidden meanings.

When with mates I enjoy changing song lyrics to fit the situation. All that matters is it fits the structure of the song and (sometimes) rhymes. It's a lot of fun - so why do I never write this way?

Here's a poem served raw and as it comes
Devi85
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Devi85  Manchester
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