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Jul 2012
Eyes open, first emotion
Lose the day ahead
Stay in bed
Blotting out creation

Eyes open, first emotion
Push out of bed
Challenge all inside your head
Retain creation

Your choice
Choose it

Eyes open, first emotion
Which move do you make?
It’s yours to take
Sort it

Stop right now
Don’t lose it
Seize the turn
Prove it

With eyes wide open, first emotion
This was the very first poem I wrote....my first tentative attempt....way back.
Laura Susan Smith
Written by
Laura Susan Smith  Warwickshire - England
(Warwickshire - England)   
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