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RiBa
Poems
Oct 2017
The Coming of the Dawn
Awake all night
Hark! The gentle silence
As calm as a placid lake on a moon lit night
My mind is at peace
As quiet dawn breaks over the eastern sky
Like the gossamer wings of the butterfly
The night slips away silently
My mind is at peace
The mellifluous strains of a distant flute
Gives way to the pink orb of the sun
And the world stirs to life
My mind is at peace
Tried to use some imagery... critiques most welcome!
#dawn
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RiBa
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