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With a Friend Like This

A friend came over, asked me how I was,

There was no time to answer, because

She told me what she thought.

So I acquiesced and fell into line,

Sang her the blues in 12 bar time.

 

I didn't know something was wrong with me

Thought it was only PMT

Or a case of fatigue.

But no apparently I’m depressed,

Need to be more like Jesus

 

Her diagnosis brought all my thanksgiving

As she scanned my life, judged all my living

She always knows better, and she tells me how.

Hope she comes again; I feel so much better now.

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blair-baker
54 / American
Published
Oct 5, 2017
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