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DeeDeeK
Poems
Jun 2012
Feeling Abandoned
you brought me to this place, breathless
alive
excited
showing me the side of you that
no one gets to see
feeling your enthusiasm, wanting to be
included
knowing
I was swept up in expression
letting you see me
smiling, you backed away, fading
shimmering
opaque
and I saw through you
as you walked away
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